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[读后续写]读后续写 It was a peaceful night. I was sleeping with my brothers, feeling warm and comfortable

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It was a peaceful night. I was sleeping with my brothers, feeling warm and comfortable. Mama was sleeping nearby, covered by snow. Papa was somewhere nearby, watching over us. There was a bright  moon and we had all had a good meal of venison (鹿肉) Papa had caught earlier.

Uncle Louis is coming”, Papa said. We loved Uncle Louis. He was a funny wolf, and always had interesting things to tell us and show us.

A little while later, Uncle Louis appeared. We did not approach him with respect the way we approached Papa. We flew at him, jumped all over him, and rolled him in the snow. Uncle Louis laughed and patted us with his paws. He is black all over, with yellow eyes, and he is very tall.

“It's the longest night of the year” , Uncle Louis said, “Does everyone feel like taking a run through the woods? I want to show you something unusual.”

Hearing that, Papa warned that it was dangerous to go near that pack of humans who lived in the woods.

“They are hardly dangerous”, Uncle Louis laughed, “They are so clumsy and make so much noise. They are not able to get near us——or even see us if we don't want them to. Besides, this is their special night. They are quite peaceful and won't be bothering about wolves.”

“Oh, please, Papa, let us run through the woods with Uncle Louis and see something unusual! ” We all begged.

“It is a fine night”, Papa smiled, “I must admit, I do feel like running.”

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And we were off, all of us, heading towards the woods.  

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We stopped and sat on a hillside and below us was the humans’ place.

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And we were off, all of us, heading towards the woods. It was almost midnight. The snow felt crispy

and crunchy under our feet. The moon shone silver on my brother's fur, and the stars were as bright as

diamonds. As we dashed through the woods, we breathed the cold air deep into our lungs, feeling refreshed.

With Papa and Uncle Louis leading the way, I felt strong and light as though I could run forever. Then we

smelled something nice.

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We stopped and sat on a hillside and below us was the humans' place. It was the first time my brothers and I had ever approached those wooden things, which, according to Uncle Louis, were made by putting

pieces of wood together. We didn't see any humans, but we could hear them singing together inside the

wooden things with warm light shining out through the holes. It was peaceful. I thought, “Even if they are

dangerous, they are animals, just like we are.” Then we threw back our heads and sitting on the hillside

above the place where the humans live, we wolves sang, too, on this unusual night.

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